Tears that fall down my cheeks,
Air that Im breathing in deep,
Heart that keeps pumping in time,
To a body that is no longer strong.
Tears that are from my blue eyes,
Air that is from the breeze around,
Heart that will not stop beating,
For that special person in mind.
For i shall love you to eternity,
Nothing will never stop that,
Even with the way i feel now,
With this body that feels hollow and empty.
I can't find the reason that you ask for,
As i can not see the answer you seek,
Though i do love you my sweet,
But for now I need to wither away.
Umm yea wat do you think???
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getting the feeling out always a good thing, i like
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Too much punctuation but I definitely feel this way after a recent breakup.
It's never easy. I love the way you've incorporated the physical feelings, and loss of feelings, because it's not just emotional. Or it could be that it's so emotionally damaging that it turns physical... I believe there's a word for that.
Can't recall it right now 
A good piece though, sad but sweet and almost like an easy let down. Keep writing.
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