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Another Once and Again

I felt the breath of your essence,
the smooth, soft caress

of your body against mine.

The look in your eyes was real.

Night Turn to dawn,

morning smiles and an embrace

were welcomed with delightful anticipation.

Goodbyes were said

and for that moment,

completion was fulfilled.

 

The afternoon came and went

by evening, apprehension

had sent in,

a familiar feeling had set in.

Like a forgotten child,

like a child witnessing

the death of his dog,

the call never came

the truth once again

had bit me in the ass

and gnawed on my mind.

"Forgotten" echoed constantly

matching the intensity of

the sadness of this yearning heart.

 

05-28-09

 

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  • smiley
    August 19
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    Wow

    wow this really touched my heart. I can feel the pain in this piece. (((((------))))))) this is me giving you a great big hug!!!!

    Yvonne

    • Cwm
      August 19
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      Thank you, hun, oh how have u been?!


  • NurseChilly gold member
    August 19

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    so poignant and sad... i feel the loss here Curtis, i hope you're okay and well.. the loss of love and friendship is gut wrenching at times..
    stay happy my friend

    • Cwm
      August 19
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      Thanks Gill and i'm great this is just a poem, a lilttle moment of unplesant loss and yearning, nothing more. How are you?