For reasons of her
a mere heartbeat away
in moments with Jules, I emerged
the embellish flower
like two divas over a pond …so vast
we lifted our skirts
and tiptoed through the azaleas
no more sacred, when we last touched
are these framed photographs
of emotional highs and sinking moments
if anything more, I care to remember
is the footless trod of our hearts,
when we were together
Author notes
I can only imagine what juls and chez mean to each other
this is my thoughts...
In a list
A contest entry
- For Juls cos I can.... by Cannonsfire.
2850 points, ended August 31, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I may revise this
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Bless Your Heart!
This is a Beauty my Friend and You have captured it all in just a few words
Brevity You bring to the forefront and I need to learn that
I can dribble on for days and slip on my own saliva
Love this and I can see they did tooooo~
Woot~ You da Bomb Mal

Thank You for sharing Your Voice

Best wishes in the contest
with love & light~ Desire~*~


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you're to kind and thanks hun...but you write such beautiful dribble...Im just short winded
lol...oh sorry about the stars...thought i clicked on five stars
thanks for stopping in...and the wonderful comment and applause
Hugs

Mal
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dont touch it Mal...it's absolutely dream-inspiring.
you really cast a spell over me this lovely morning, thank you.
love,
jin

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but im on the bottom of the list
LOL
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"I can only imagine"....it would be as beautiful as this poem. I am sure of it.


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Oooh I feel like I tiptoed in on a private moment but...yes I think you captured her well and I know she'd blush too lol
C


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you must read the authors notes
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mmm young love its alway so sweet
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ahhhh....a wonderful entry for the contest
beautiful imagery poet
love the second stanza


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Thank you Mal for penning this for me. Brought a smile to my face even at this ungodly hour.
@ the two divas!!
Chez and I have some fantastic pictures from our adventures across the world on FB.
Juls


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ah what friendships can bring to fill our hearts...
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