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A Poem About Two

For reasons of her
a mere heartbeat away
in moments with Jules, I emerged
the embellish flower

like two divas over a pond …so vast
we lifted our skirts
and tiptoed through the azaleas   

no more sacred, when we last touched
are these framed photographs
of emotional highs and sinking moments

if anything more, I care to remember
is the footless trod of our hearts,
when we were together





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I can only imagine what juls and chez mean to each other
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  • Desire gold member
    August 24

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    Bless Your Heart!

    This is a Beauty my Friend and You have captured it all in just a few words
    Brevity You bring to the forefront and I need to learn that
    I can dribble on for days and slip on my own saliva
    Love this and I can see they did tooooo~
    Woot~ You da Bomb Mal
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


    • Malabu
      August 24
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      you're to kind and thanks hun...but you write such beautiful dribble...Im just short winded lol...oh sorry about the stars...thought i clicked on five stars
      thanks for stopping in...and the wonderful comment and applause
      Hugs

      Mal


  • JinSays gold member
    August 23

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    dont touch it Mal...it's absolutely dream-inspiring.
    you really cast a spell over me this lovely morning, thank you.
    love,
    jin


  • Dalaney gold member
    August 19
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    "I can only imagine"....it would be as beautiful as this poem. I am sure of it.


  • Cannonsfire
    August 18

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    Oooh I feel like I tiptoed in on a private moment but...yes I think you captured her well and I know she'd blush too lol C


  • Naughtygrlred
    August 18
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    mmm young love its alway so sweet


  • crivanea silver member
    August 18

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    ahhhh....a wonderful entry for the contest beautiful imagery poet love the second stanza

  • Thank you Mal for penning this for me. Brought a smile to my face even at this ungodly hour. @ the two divas!!
    Chez and I have some fantastic pictures from our adventures across the world on FB.
    Juls

    • Malabu
      August 20

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      ah what friendships can bring to fill our hearts...

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