I go and take another pill
It makes me feel superficial
This mask and cover of my emotions
Makes me drown in the heart felt oceans
A sea of pain and sorrow
After hearts were pierced by cupids arrow
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welcome to allpoetry
Cupid's arrow does have the sharpest point, does it not?
Interesting how you have written this... the mixed images. I liked it very much.
Great job. Please continue writing and share your words.
Enjoy the site.
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nice word's
i like this one it was very short but i really got the point behind the word's love is never what we as a civilization think it will be and from what i understand this is what you are trying to say keep up the good work and to live with out is like to die .
bless it be xx
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