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A note to ponder about the mind...

Fake smiles and faker emotions:
These act as my shield, masking the true me
Hiding down deep inside, staying away from the world
Hating hurting, hating hiding
My mind is my save haven; It is the only world I live in
It is my last thread, where I cling with all my strength to humanity
And I cling for dear life, holding myself up above the abyss
All in the hope that some day I can be free from this world I tire of
All in the hope of truly feeling the sun touch my face

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it randomly popped in my mind, so ta-da: here it is.

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  • ronnica
    August 25

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    I like the first two lines they drew me in (not sure about faker), did you want save or safe? The mind is a fantastic world in every sense of the word. You have some nice lines putting this together. I much enjoyed reading, well done.

  • I like that....like living the life is just a midstep to where you want to be...
    How the entire time it seems like you cannot take it..but you hold on anyway...
    because one day it will be worth it....
    Very pretty well done Danni Fish!


  • daviscth silver member
    August 18

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    You gave this the right title because there is quite a bit to ponder on within these lines. I dearly love the last line as it offers up hope that things will be okay. Thanks for sharing sweetie.

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