"I'm calm, I'm fine" does not describe
This sick twisted emotion thats whiling inside
Eyes clouded in green with the things that you've seen
As you sit there tormented by things quite obscene
The monster within wants revenge on the one who took them away
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Wow...another very well described emotion...
Very well written and I like the rhythm I got while reading...
and I agree jealousy is a monster and the feeling that comes from it is desired revenge...
<4...<-- Kinda like <3 but more.... -
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awwwww. :3
yay! thank yewww
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"Eyes clouded in green with the things that you've seen"
For only containing five lines, this is an amazingly powerful write. I know jealousy well, and you've taken the words from my lips. Bravo! -
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why thank you.
trust me, alot of work went into this, and just about everything else i write as well.
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