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Sorry

I wish I could go back time
And undo each mistake
But what's done is done
And it's far too late.

I know I have no excuse
For all the things I did-
I should have come to you
But instead, I hid.

You loved me with a love
That was pure and true
But it all came to a screeching halt
When you said we were through.

I never meant to hurt you-
I am sorry I pushed you away-
I was overwhelmed by fear
And I was afraid of wat you'd say.

Deep down I knew I could come to you
But I waanted to be strong
Now I see the choice I made
Was completely wrong.

I hope you find happiness
And may all your dreams come true.
Never forget my promise:
I will wait for you forever if I have to.

I know this is brief, but I am overwhelmed... :)

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  • FallingRainDrop
    August 19, 2009
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    this is wonderful. written very well, i can defintaly relate.


  • A Lonely Soul
    August 18, 2009

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    *cries* i know you're sorry, but my heart still hurts so much from it all. a part of me wants you back, but I don't know if I can do that right now, if ever. I put my all in us, and you broke my heart in so many pieces i don't know if it can be easily put back together. I was so complete with you, now I feel like it was a dream that I've waken up from. a dream that started off beautiful, till it became a nightmare. i understand some of what you did wrong, but the rest adds on and it hurts to much. i don't know what to say right now, and i don't know what to do. I've been hurt more than I have ever been, and i don't know it this love is worth fighting for anymore. I'm close to the edge of saying it's officially died and best left alone for good. i guess time will tell though...


  • RainbowEyes
    August 18, 2009
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    this is for tori...