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Pinstripes.

Missing image

Pinstriped metal

ten miles long

stitching seams

that just fall apart...

 

Weavers looming

their way forward

Taking hours

to get from the start. 

 

Hem'd in chaos

with loose ends

a fabric woven

by society-Amen.

 

 

 

 

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Frogzter gold member
    August 31

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    Hem'd in chaos is right! Great take on the prompt. Thanks for your entry and best wishes,

    Frogz~


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    August 20

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    How Unique!!

    Love it!! These words are so true, as well. Your pinstripes are a winner!!
    Peace, Love & Hugs Always,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Pure Thought silver member
    August 18

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    I used to keep a set of drum sticks in my car when I traveled around Washington, DC. Used to practice and pass the time it did help pass the time, but not my drumming...lol

    well woven words,


  • Cannonsfire
    August 17

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    We all get blocked by life sometimes, it's the strong who make it out C