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If I Could Live My Life Again

If I could live my life once again
I do a lot of stuff.
I would try my very best at things
though that would not be good enough.

I would tell my mom I love her,
and that I really do care.
Though sometimes I don’t show it,
the love is always there.

I would try real hard in school
I would always do my best.
Even on the stupid stuff.
I just would not get all stressed.

Though my sister is annoying,
she is the only one I got.
I love that girl to death,
and that is something that will never stop.

I would turn the television off,
and the computer off as well.
I would spend my time with the people I love,
now wouldn’t that be swell.

I would tell my dad I love him,
though he was never there.
I would tell myself he loved me too,
and that he really does care.

I would try to meet new people,
and never get too shy
because everyone is different
and that is not a lie.

When I think about my life again
its harder then u would know.
To wipe the tears out of my eyes
its nothing I will show.

I would cherish all the moments
with my grandpa, whom I miss.
I wish I could have given him
just one last special kiss.

I would have loved to see my grandpa
just before he died,
just to tell him that I loved him,
and just sit there by his side.

if you couldnt tell
there is alot that i would change.
If I only could live my life differently,
all the stuff I would rearrange.

Author notes

This started off as being a boring old essay that i had to write for language class...
but my brain was apparently in poem mode, so everything that i tried to write normal, came out sounding all poetic, so i just made it a poem, i just hope my teacher will accept my poem for my essay.... =/

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  • lovedxinxsighs
    August 18
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    thats pretty creative of you. lol i never would've tried that