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I Live and Die by Her Name


Is she on? Is she there? Can I see here name? Oh, my fears...
Does she sign off knowing of my love?
Does she know she takes my heart with her?

Ah, there she is, my heart is complete;
but I must not be eager, I must let her contact me when she is ready...

Will I drive her away, and lose my heart?
How can I keep her...



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  • you forgot to mention that the mermaid stinks of fishy ocean smells. honestly, who could forget that stench?!

    what a lovely, paranoid little piece this is ap life does take hold of us at times... a glimmer of romance here and there. good stuff xx


    • wbiro gold member
      August 18
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      well, hey... i like that term, "AP Life"... the things we can do here... like play beach volley ball with stinky, slimy mermaids... (even if they are topless...)


  • still.she.waits
    August 17
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    don't be mad, this makes me laugh.


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    August 17
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    I am laughing at the comments below me.

    nice idea for a poem.

    • wbiro gold member
      August 17
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      well, we'll never know about the mermaid...


  • paulcreates silver member
    August 17
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    But, but....she's a sociopath...sociopaths produce obsessive-compulsives
    lol

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