Today I found calm
An ocean of happyness
I was led there by a friend
By accident
And now I am floating
A cushion of air
being buffeted by the winds
pushed by the currents
An end to all the worry, the woe
Created by life
Nothing can compare
Nothing will compare
I am above reality
Above life
Above sanity
Away from strife
I drifted away
Never to be found again
My mind has been released
Onto crystaline plateaus
Guarded by turrets of air
Formed from raw thought
Author notes
An impulsively written poem after a friend of mine suceeded in A) Cheering me up
Sending me on a trip through my own mind and C) Making me smile for the first time that week.
Its old, but I like it.
What did you think?
Comments
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Hello...
"formed from raw thought"
I love this.
Really like this poem! Reminds me of something from a Sigur Ros or Radical Face song...
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This is a great piece.
You chose your words well.
Words like floating, cushion, happiness and above make every stanza seem light and airy, which of course fits the point of the poem perfectly.
(:
I really enjoyed this.
Nick~
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