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- no title - _ Fri., Nov. 30, 2007

                                      -        Trust

                                            thorns


toes spread to speak new language
cough secondhand poetry, strain to enunciate jumbled, potent verbs
  embrace      -      abandon
I'm not quite safe here



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Found this one randomly while looking through old notebooks for extra paper. It is VERY old and from a very different time and place for me. I don't know what I didn't like or think was good enough about it, but it speaks so much to me now about that particular moment in my life. Who knows, maybe I'll remember what I thought was subpar about it and delete it, but until then, I hope you all enjoy the little surprise I found in my closet

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