I see you standing there
don't you know
I feel so alone
without you
but you can't see that
I'm keep my love for you
a secret
nobody knows not even you
I would die if you found it
out.
My love for you
is different
Can't you see
my feelings for you
even tho I don't
want you to know
I just want to
let you know
my secret love for you
Author notes
Just a stupid little thing I wrote because of my secret crush that everyone new about
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A contest entry
- tell me a secret. by aanika.
1750 points, ended August 29, 2009, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very raw in truth and emotions...crushes can be wonderful things to experience but they can also break our hearts...nicely done.
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I like this..I can relate from past experiences.
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Very cute and sweet.
Crushes and secret loves always make for good reads.
I enjoyed it!
Good penning!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
you should enter it in my next contest. Great job chicka. You have a wonderful talent. Keep up the wonderful work. Wonderful talent.
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good, i like how you use words to describe nothing less than you deepest emotions. its very nice.
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