One step...
Two steps
Three step....
Four
It glistens in the light
Welcoming me into the trap
I cant escape it
It pierces my skin,
Tears my soul apart,
Takes over my mind
Breathless,taken by the awakening
No tears tonight
None come to my eyes
Music plays aloud
To drown the pain
If only this could end...
Red liquid surrounds me
White towels
Covered in red stains
Clean water
Washes over the wounds
Of what Ive created
One step...
Two step,
Three step...
Four
Author notes
Its not finshed but im kind of stuck now so I'll get back to it later,but feel free to leave comments,thanks x
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I thought this was good so far. The emotion was raw and the poem had allot of desrciptive words/lines etc. It had a good flow that was pretty good. I can't really suggest an ending though, I guess it's okay the way it is really. I hope you try and figure out something soon.
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thanks for the comment,i hope i figure something out soon *hugs* x
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