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Here again

Here I am again feeling all confused
I've felt like this so many times
you'd think I'd be a pro by now
unravel these feelings and climb out of the box
but nope here I am
wondering what's up

Why can't people see how hard I do try
how what they do day in day out
still makes me cry
Why can't they feel the love from my heart
and then finally realise it's time to buck up

Would it really hurt
for a two way trying field
motivation, appreciation
hand in hand
to feel

I know there is love
I know that we care
it's just the day to day stuff
that is getting in my hair!

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  • nasty24
    August 26
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    good poem keep it up.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    August 18
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    your always confused,,thats why,,your so appealing,,im confused too,,but not appealing,,love this pete