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The green of all i convey

 
Her eyes were green like the stars
Never felt alone, ever!
I always felt loved when looking into here green eyes of passion
Such devotion and emotion, rolled up into one moment of elation

Her beauty is all around us, here beauty is inside us all.
Never a wasted song in her name, no words to great or small
Yes her wisdom poured out like a fountain of able truth.
On the grass of eternity I slept by her side only to journey with her forever.
How I love mother earth
Always here and able
Always careful to serve
In her most hour of fabled contra-ire

Those trees, where like gates into my own created mythical world
Enchanted and deeply formed from anything I had seen before
Highly sought and greatly marvelled.
Those were the days I long for once again
To reach her in that moment, when all I know or see, can not be touched only by her one true beauty

She is the mirror of all I survey
Down those treacherous paths, only in words I can convey
She is the reflection of blissfulness, the calmed stillness of all my inner words plays
To dance into her heart for her amusement, would be my pleasure and honour to convey her every wish come true

Money could not compare to her sweet face, that has not aged to this day, to that forever present smile only my heart could wear with most assured conviction and sway
To say those words I sold in gold, only to water her fountain and help grow those flowers she grew on this most beautiful of days to obey.


















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  • penman gold member
    August 18
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    Excellent

    Oh my now you got great green in this write. So very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • negatoreyfan
    August 17

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    A+

    1 stanza Such monumental compassion
    2 stanza Endurance and hope rolled up in one
    3 stanza O that's pretty/handsome
    4 stanza What A grand still calm dreaming along your endless brook, It's like mother earth says dance child so I can see you flutter away spark my concern for the day
    5 stanza So smart


    • Deaths Prayer
      August 17
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      hi hun

      Oh your sweet and kind

      That's one of the best comments i have had since i've been on here. i knew when i write this that it felt good, it was just flowing out of me and the prompt. well "GREEN" i know when i write somehting like this it's like i know where i'm going. i could of went on for a long time with this. but i didn't want to over do it lol...thanks for your comment most grateful