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A Dove's Cry

My heart has been broken numerous times...
Have you seen a dove’s pure cry?
Have you seen a pain like mine?
Look deep,..deep into my heart and see,
It isn’t just you,
but,
what makes me,... me
Think I can’t see what makes a dream real?
Look beyond my heart…
You will see me still.
It’s not just you that makes my soul cry,
It’s the fact that I know the reason why,
I know you know that you know why we both know,
True love would only grow if you let it show,
Can I stop you from thinking things?
No! Do I want to stop you from pondering this?
No! I want you to see what I see, you think  I don’t know?
I look into my heart and I see you too so, we grow, I know
I don’t think,… what if, and but she could be more…
No!!!
I speak and I feel my heart grow… not your fault god made this so
Ok,.. I know, you want to find, some guy to sweep you from your mind?
But, there is this guy from somewhere and somehow he sees his wife!
He doesn't see auscultation nor false reasons but his pure love for life,
But, what you don’t know is baby,… I will always love you to the end of time.

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