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Birthed by Bleeding Breath

Beneath the fiery moon, ablaze in burning blood

The creatures of the night, flee even this the fervent flood

A demon of the earth, like acid creeping cross

Drowning out the life, and caring not for living loss

Dragging at the souls, who scream a silent song

The ashen fingers scar, left lingering far too long

In the morning light, it dawned in deep despair

Unleashed upon the world, with no concern or care

Birthed by hand of man, a cindering draw of death

Assassin so unseen, it’s fueled by bleeding breath

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I was inspired by the blood red moon outside my house that was caused by a forest fire a few miles away.

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  • silverscent gold member
    August 20

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    I loved your use of alliteration in this, you certainly have got that device mastered.
    I think your vivid descriptions made this write a strong write.
    Thanks for entering.