I write this to you because
I don't know that I will ever get better.
I'll put this in a bottle
(the same as my emotions)
And send it off to sea.
I hope you find it.
I hope you find it
On the distant shore.
The beach where I have never been.
The island where I am not allowed.
You found refuge!
Where I cannot reach.
Where I cannot reach
Because I have no wings.
My stone-hard heart will sink me
To the bottom of the ocean.
Where I lie drowning
And it feels the same.
It all feels the same.
Death and Life.
For, life without you is surely death.
So, I throw my life away
To get a new life.
To get a new life
That better fits your life.
I hope someday you'll notice
My cries for help.
This is where I wait
Buried!- At the bottom of the sea.
Author notes
The poem "Waiting (or The Passerbyer)" is about my struggle to communicate with other people. It really deals with the feeling of seperation that I think most people go through when they are close friends. Because no matter how much we love someone we will always struggle with being able to tell them how we really feel.
Be honest, how does this make you feel?
Comments
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hopefully one day that special someone is shown the real you and all ur true feelings are exposed. it's only right that they're able to see your innermost feelings. maybe you can share this poem!
wonderful job though. i was able to travel with you from beginning to end. -
A great write, I feel for you . I love how you wrote it with the message in the bottle, Oh it just oozes perfection Brilliant
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But sometimes people really just feel you. It is very good...keep writing.
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