Yellow and green you highlight my eyes,
Auburn is a wonder never before seen.
Obtuse is an angle whatever the philosopher says,
Will be with it or will be with it without.
'Straught feelings being penciled,
Aching symbols forever playing.
Wolf is a attitude,
We live a dream.
The car hits me.
A contest entry
- Congestion (Pic Prompt) by Frogzter.
875 points, ended August 31, 2009, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ouch! Hate when that happens. I like your take on the prompt. It is unique and interesting. Thanks for entering and best wishes,
Frogz~
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Traffic Jam Nightmares!
Sitting in the freeway's parking lot, time slows and the eyes glaze over, then a car rear ends us: such a rude awakening as we stare helplessly as our car rear ends the next. You were very clever in how you painted this picture with awesome phrasing and metaphors. You demonstrate great talent.
Luv in Christ, BonnieQ
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wow
thats amazing, bringing in different objects and colors and strumming them together to make this poem sound complicated. i love it!!!!
Wolf is a attitude,
We live a dream.
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