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Home once more

the sky which
whilst you were away,
was gray.
Now is blue
and the sun will shine
in this heart of mine.
Until the winds of destiny,
take you away
once more.

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  • Puppydog gold member
    August 17

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    LOVELY SENTIMENTS!!!!!

    Such soft, tender and sweet words for the one who owns your heart.