Everything You give me is my home
I deserve it all
Through Your eyes create me
You let my imagination grow
You let me dream to I make it fantastic
Take my best and turn it into gold to add to someones treasure chest
My own personal gift to them
That's all I need
Blessings from You to give to them make me so free to please
Thank you for letting me grow in Your name
Under the beautiful shooting fiery stars
You have tamed my soul and heart to live only by my faith filled words and praise
Author notes
Quote Prompt:
Oh God ! Your name is my home...Unknown.
A contest entry
- my home... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended August 30, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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love the message and heart revealed in these line. nicely done.
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A prayer..
of high praise, directed to the One having given you everything. Well don and congrats on the HM.
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I agree with your feelings..yes HE has tamed our souls ..and you have said this description with all your poetic bliss..love it..well done...
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nice poem well constructed!! good luck in the contest
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