I would trade
the sun
in an instant
for an eternity
of moon and stars
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Great piece...
This says so much with so few words... Truly wonderful.. -
You are indeed a beautiful soul, that writes from within. I missed you, and your pen...Love, Dawn
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beautifully stated..
A wonderful short piece...
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good stuff
Beautifully crafted, this.
instant vs eternity
Neat.
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Beautiful...Night, I look up and wonder...It is how it is. Excellent work
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I would too.....what a wonderful piece, sending you my love
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With rain alongside the moon and stars and it would be perfect. Love this.
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Awe this is awesome, you know the moon and the stars are soothing while the sun can nurish but also be very harsh.
I love the contrast in this.
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