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The Ghost Dances

I drew a breath of love and passions
Romance dances with the fashions
Come to me and hear my calling
Taste my lips, I know you're falling
If love was all that I had to give
Would it be enough to live
If all that I had was all you would take
Would you stay asleep.. or for me awake?
Would you leave your world behind for me
Would you kiss my dreams of land and sea
Even if you would, I don't know if you could...

Lost to time this love of mine
Opportunities that you gave
Forever lay in a frosted grave

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  • John BoSox
    August 17
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    True love..You describe it perfectly..good for ypu..So endearing..so soft..so nice, almost sensual...I loved this..Congrats

    John