You kissed her on the coach and you used my name in vain,
but still I tell myself it can be the same,
I kissed you on the golf course after giving you head,
You kissed her on the balcony a lot more than you said,
She says you're not worth it like she has the fucking right,
To do what I've being trying to all fucking night,
I wait and wait and wait until you get home,
I wait and wait and wait, worse I wait alone,
For your magic explanation, attempt to fix it all,
The more I tell myself you love me the more I feel a fool,
So I worry worry worry until I make myself ill,
I even fail at that so I sit deadly still,
I catch someone in the mirror I've never looked so beautiful,
Moonlight and shame- a device to help me pull
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Everything you gave me still hangs next to my bed,
Everything thing you said hangs like ghosts in my head,
I love you and I miss you for a year you were mine,
Make everything better or fuck off for the last time.
A contest entry
- Shatter Your Chains (Freewriting/ProsePoetry) by intoothandclaw.
700 points, ended September 10, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Did you actually do this as a freewrite?
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Yeah, I was up quite late and had a load of thoughts running through my head so wrote them all down, the rhyme was accidental at first but I just kept going with it.
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Interesting. All right, just checking.
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