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Stupid People

Stupid people,
Laughing at me,
I'm crying inside,
But they can't see.

Striking me,
With every sound,
Getting closer,
To the ground.

Down I go,
But they don't care,
Taking my life,
Taking my air.

Put the blade,
To my wrist,
Slide it over,
Like a gentle kiss.

First the pain,
Then the rush,
I'm high as a kite,
I can't be touched.

Slowly, slowly,
Coming down,
Eyes flutter shut,
Tere's no more sound.

Author notes

Okay, so the last three verses dont really rhyme, but whatever.

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  • dehhann
    August 18
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    so much great

    i love the poem!!!