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Bounce Back

So much up to the sky
Did he create those lips
That said to me
This was the end
Please call it quits
Tie up your desires
Swallow prides for hire
Little liar

And when I moved on
I had saw that the accident I made
Was laughed with my friends
It's all ok.
When I bit off those ears
Of a dog's last fight,
Well, you said hey that's life
Who am I to say?

I guess I was naive to
Fall for that damned scam
In the end, it was all worth wile
'Cause now I understand.

With every cent gone
Bought whatever that hacker wanted.
Hey, gave me the chance
To make a new name.

Yes sir, that's me, so true.
Too bad I just gave up
My freedom on the streets.
But look, this old guy's got so much
To tell me behind these bars.
New meaning to life and looks to uphold.

Now and then my little boy
He ends up on the wrong end
Of a loaded gun.
In the end, I appreciated life
More than most would get to know.

Well, when she left me,
I shattered like the glass on my wall.
But I found a new shell under that piece.
And it seems like there are some new plans.

Now I can finally fly off
And hit ground on new lands.
Here I sit now, Listen friend,
I'm bouncing back once again

Author notes

After a long tme of coping over the loss of a very close love, I feel as though I am fianlly ready to Bounce Back. Thanks to all that were there for me, even when I felt I had no one.

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Comments


  • Sheilasbabygal4life
    October 7

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    This was very well written. I liked how nicely this one flowed. It was good. It was very moving. I am sure someone feels the same way as you did. Anyways. This was great. Keep up the good work!!~


  • insidemjsnotebook
    September 4

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    Some people never bounce back, but I am glad that you are able to. This was I agree edgy and almost bitter at some parts but it never does take the fact away that it is a spectacular piece. Well Done.


  • Desiree-Valdez
    August 20

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    Wow this is a very edgy poem..... I LOVE IT. It reaches out in many ways. Very interesting and keeps you eager to read on and on!!! Wonderful Write!!