I got home after school one day,
I got bored, I had nothing to do.
I was thinking and wondering away,
As always, I was thinking of you.
I don't know how much you realise,
The amount of love I have for you.
It's so hard to explain sometimes,
But I figured this poem is one way to.
So, here goes, I'll share my heart,
I'll tell you everything I feel.
Love is an understatement to my love,
And I know for sure it's real.
I never want to be alone,
For without you my world is gone.
You keep my heart from turning to stone,
Without you I couldn't carry on.
I remember that night with each other,
Sitting in the back of the car.
My hand moving closer and closer,
But it never quite made it that far.
I love it when you kiss me,
And hold my hand with care.
You make me so happy,
I hate when you're not here.
I still remember the party,
Out by the swings all night.
I remember the way you kissed me,
With you near, everything's alright.
I love the way you stare at me,
Although I'm still unsure why.
I love the way you ask 'what's wrong?'
When it sounds like I start to cry.
I love it when you say 'I love you,'
And mean it with all of your heart.
There's nothing that we couldn't do,
And nothing could tear us apart.
I smile when you call me wife,
And I laugh when you tell a joke.
I will love you for all my life,
If we're millionaires or if we're broke.
I love the way you smell,
And love the way you love.
You always treat me so well,
I can reach the stars and above.
I love the way you hold me tight,
Like you're scared I would fall.
You are the love of my life,
There's nothing I could want more.
Whenever I see you I feel in my heart,
A beat or two skip by.
The way you talk is such a fine art,
And when I hear it I feel I can fly.
I hope we grow old together,
Have a house, children, and rings.
I pray we'll stay together forever,
Always making new memories.
Today you'll celebrate 16 years,
While we celebrate 51 days.
In future let there only be laughs, not tears,
I hope you have a great birthday.
I hope this poem has explained,
Or given the slightest justice.
I love you more than anything, Craig,
And you, my love, are my purpose.
Author notes
I have been editing this and adding to it. Alot of it is personal, and you may not completely understand some of it...
Sorry it's so long (= I started adding to it and couldn't stop, there's just so much to say!
I wrote this poem for my boyfriend, I plan to read it to him on his birthday but am still unsure if he will like it? I love him more than words can describe!
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How did you like it? Should I read it to my BF on his bday?
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wow wonderfull write no need to apoligize about the lenght hun its yours to write and sometimes more the merry er thank you for entering in my contest and i wish you the bestest of luck too. ~jasmine~
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"Love is an understatement to my love".... It confused me at first. and didn't quite seem to fit. But it actually works perfectly. This is great.... since i don't understand it perfectly, and I love it, I'm simply positive that he will!
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i loved it
it had some emotions in there that i feel for this boy.
and if i were you i would read it too him. he'll love it
thanks for entering
great job
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Its from the heart! Ofcourse he'll love it
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fab just fab
MAGNIFICO
I hope he is deserving this wonderful piece of heartpumping poetry.if he doesnt like it its him trust me on that one. this is exquisite.
P.S. take a shotgun with you so if he does not like it instantly shoot him in the face
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Hahaha! Thanks, love the shotgun idea! Thanks for such a kind comment!
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Awe this is very heart touching! I promise you that he will love it! Poetry is a wonderful gift!
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This is truly a beautiful piece written in dedication for your boyfriend. Love can be a wonderful thing. It can make you laugh, and it can make you cry. As you pointed out, it can also make your heart skip a beat. I think we have all experienced that at some time in our lives and it sure is a very special feeling indeed. Your poem was just brilliant. Cherished words full of affection, desire and care. I really hope you get what you want in life because after reading your page, you to me sound like a very special person who really knows what they want. Well done.
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Thanks so much, your comment was very lovely and it meant a lot to me that you read my poem and my page and also wished me well in life. Again, thanks for your beautifully kind words!
-heva *heva*
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Lovely
And if your boyfriend has any sense he will absolutely love it - its a lovely simple ( in the nicest way) bit of poetry it makes everything clear without disguising it in fancy wording and metaphors - very good
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Thank you very much!
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aww, this is so sweet =]
"realise" should be "realize."
nice write
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Thanks. And in my country it is spelt like realise. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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yeah :[ i realised that it wasn't a mistake after i commented. sorry!
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this is a very nice write, sounds very innocent, very cute...!
maybe, you could add a few happy memories, just telling you, becos when i wrote a poem for my GF on her birthday i didnt add any,then i realised it wud hav been nice, just a suggestion...
i am happy you have someone to love so much, he must be happy...
good luck...for love has many twists...
-pranj
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That's a really good idea, I will do that. Thanks so much for the lovely comment and the great advice!
-heva
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Wow love it
Your a talented writer keep it up -
This is very nice(: I think it's really cute. Nice emotion.
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i loved it. i wish i had this kind of love torwards someone. your lucky love isnt for everyone.
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