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I Love You, Forever & Always

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Tonight I hand everything over to your heart
you can have anything that my soul will give
Your loving eyes tell me everythings alright
& there won't be anything that we can't face
Your hands in mine
as we walk this life
Side by side in love
as husband & wife
Hearts fill w/ passion
two adjoining souls
You and I together
facing heavy tolls
Breathing in faith
exhaling all doubt
Tender emotions
longing to get out
My God I love you!
No other man can steal the place you have
trusting was earned by your loving ways....
Tonight I give you everything that I can give
and not just anything or anyone can have it




XOXOXO.X                   O XOXOXO
Passions is on a high    her heart is beating fast
emotions are reeling and things are looking up
Tears are overflowing, I found the one at last
now my heart is overwhelming, proud
Love's around when not looking
it has slapped me hard
I'm smiling indeed
I can because
I am in
love


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Forever & Always

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 17

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    Beautiful form poetry here Tory. It is good to see you happy. Best of luck in every part of your life. May happiness stay with you. This was so beautiful.

    Joann


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    August 17

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    Bravo

    This is beautiful, There is a lucky man out there for sure. A feel good read for sure. Congrats on your happiness you deserve nothing less. Smiling for you ear to ear my friend. Be happy and well, Rick


  • JohnnyD gold member
    August 17

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    Always have liked these formatted- designed pens- probably because I can't do them worth a damn! LOL!

    Amazing talent and construction gal- keep up the great work



    len


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    August 17

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    This is an awesome love poem Tory
    I am sooooo happy for you
    You are a special woman that deserves the best and to have happiness and love in your life.
    Your words are very touching and comes from the heart
    I love the shape poetry as well
    Very creative
    Stay safe, be happy, and enjoy life the best that you can
    Much love my friend

    David


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    August 17

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    This is breath taking...beautiful words of devotion and love! May it grow and flourish...and keep you smiling like this for all time. The poem is so tender...and I love the form in which it is presented. The pic is lovely as well...love is a gift we all hunger for...I am praying that you and your love will be this happy for always!

    You...

    Blessings from my ~~~


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 17

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    Very clever concrete

    And beautiful content too!

    Love

    Jeff


  • glenn shannon silver member
    August 17

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    congrats on your new found love Tory glad you have found a big love thats brings you some nice positive energy it shows in this wonderful write bless ya it makes me happy


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    August 17

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    Oh my Tory..This wwas wonderful
    I loved how you layed this poem out .The form was brilliant..(I'm still working on my form poetry so far all i have is a buttery. lol )
    all the words just were gorgeous.
    It gave me cold chills.A spectacular piece and it fit the picture so lovingly well!

    Great job
    Love, Mandi

  • Jake Summers
    August 17

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    OMG Tory. This is so special. Very tender and meaningful. Made me have chills up and down my spine and tears in my eyes. This poem means alot to me. The form spelling out I love you is spectacular. I love you too baby.
    Hugs and kisses,
    Jake, your hubby

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