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My Paradox

I would like to whisper the words I'm dying to say,though the words would be useless
I would like to spell out the feelings my dear,that you leave me broken down with
There's something in your eyes that paralyzes my being,rendering my own faults out in the open
to trust you is deadly,to love you with all my heart is suicide, I'm stuck choosing my own poison
but I don't want to walk away,maybe I'm a sick women,or maybe I'm inlove....I can't decide
I don't want to be afraid of my own shadow as it hinders the real vision my eyes want to bestow on me
Who you are is like a venom killing me with each minute that I'm exposed (run) your just a fatal disease
As you wrap me around your sickly finger silencing all sanity when will I see the truth in you?
"Never" Echos through the walls in my mind creating a sense of hopelessness (Just end it)
Fear unravels with every word you sing to me ( Don't go) there's no end to this torture god's given me
Please go
Please go...
No, don't go...
Just save me
Kill me
So now I fear I'm in a labyrinth of loves design,that's killing everything that just happens to me mine
Goodbye,I have lost and I have never won

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