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Across The Line.

If there was one thing were I would draw the line
it would be you become mine across the line.
I know that we are apart,
but I believe that the miles that separate us won’t matter.
That first kiss you took a chance on
Gotten me enamored by the truth
of that very moment that love
cemented it’s self in both of us.
I believe all that is fearful in us will sort it’s self out.
To keep it simple.
To accept it.
Just feel it.
For all it’s worth I love that your difficult
Hey so am I, but I am willing to work it out.
I don’t know about you,
but I not going to give up without a good fight.

Audrey Evans
8/06/2009

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  • Awwh, this is a lovely write.
    And it is about working through the tough things, no matter what.
    Lovely write, thanks you for entering:]