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All your fault

As I sit here thinking
Here I am with you
All I can do is well
Think of you
From your smile
To your laugh
Your eyes
Your voice

While I listen to music
Songs come on that
Well remind me of you
From well Battlefield
To Knock you down
To Here without you
And those inbetween
They all remind me of you

You made me feel again
Made me want something more
The more i got to know you
The more i felt for you
The more i wanted to be with you
I was too scared to ask you
Afraid of rejection
Afraid of being shot down
All I need is you babe

My heart was closed for repairs
Felt damaged and abused
Tossed to the side
So i played like
I wanted to be single
I was afraid of being hurt
Of putting myself out there
Until you came along

Your my angel
The reason for my smile
The reason for my laugh
The reason for my happiness
If love kept us alive
I could live forever
With you by my side
You are my everthing

I feel in love
With your smile
With your charm
In love with your touch
In love with your kiss
In love with you
I Love you
Always and Forever






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  • mimzmonkey
    November 8

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    This kinda struck a note with me...these lines
    "I was afraid of being hurt
    Of putting myself out there"
    That's basically where I'm at right now. As always, I love your work<3