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I cried today.

I cried today Malachy

for the sense of you

that touching hug you

left me with each time

you went home...

I cried for them times

you told me your jokes

and the memories we

once looked back on...

I cried for you brother

As you lay there in that bed

because inside I knew

you had already left...

I cried today as I recalled

this same day five years ago,

When I kissed you goodbye

as I held your hand

Then turned to

switch of the machine.

I cried...

I cried...

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Today is my brothers' anniversary. he is five years passed. He was 44yrs old and was called Malachy R.I.P.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    August 20

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    A heart-breaking Poem...

    You are much loved, and I know your brother was, too. Time doesn't necessarily heal all wounds, but the little thought that he is with you, still yet a reminder of him, must bring you a little comfort. Thank you for sharing your heart and soul with all of us. You are a blessing in disguise, Dolores. Take care, and I'm thinking of you over there. God bless you and yours. R.I.P., Malachy. P.S. I'm also wishing you all the best!!
    Peace, Love & Hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    August 17

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    my heart as always is with you today Dolores.
    Like Chez, I remember Malachy's presence around you and your home. He is always there.

    Juls


  • Cannonsfire
    August 16

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    But the aroma's he brings to your kitchen are just wonderful and we all know he is there with you C


  • Pure Thought silver member
    August 16
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    My heart weeps with yours.


  • crivanea silver member
    August 16
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    absolutely heartbreaking

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