the words are centered again harsh refrains,
simple sentences constricting rib-cages,
creeping fingertips again windowpanes.
floorboards creak against bones as he abstains,
he find her tossing and turning in stages,
the words are centered against harsh refrains.
concoction swirls and her screams echo in his brain,
she has long fought to keep silent amongst his rages,
creeping fingertips against windowpanes.
fingers around throats as they become each others bane,
she cried as he rips her story from pages,
the words are centered against harsh refrains.
he falls into her and she wraps them in chains,
she chokes and pushed and finds his hidden gauges,
creeping fingertips against windowpanes.
his eyes roll back as he tries to contain,
her broken heart hiding amongst ages,
the words are centered against harsh refrains,
creeping fingertips against windowpanes.
Author notes
i. my secret? im a liar. if i havent already told you. i dont lie all the time and i mostly have enough of a conscious to keep myself in line but i can go days on one lie-months even.
ii. i have kissed my best friends boyfriend knowing full well they were dating. i would never do it again-and it wasnt me that instigated it. but i wont say that i wasnt to blame. so-yes. hate me-whatever.
iii. i have a tendency to be rather insensitive on days that arent agreeing with me.
prompts-
form: villanelle
title:lie to me
a p p l e j u i c e m e m o r i e s
okay-listen. i dont care if this sucks horribly. i love it because it took me forever to do- so you will appreciate it. yes? >.> good! 
now then.
i used:
Edwin Arlington Robinson's villanelle The House on the Hill was first published in The Globe in September 1894.
as inspiration for my villanelle. you can read it here:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Villanelle#Examples
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Please comment; Please critique; just let me know what you think
Comments
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We all lie ... Aome better then others . Writing on iPhone . It's so annoying ... I miss you my muffin dear
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i suppose we do.
Aw. I miss you too!
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This does not suck. I like it.
It looks right to me too. You should show this to Amarathine Lover. She has done bunches of these.
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Im glad!
o.o i dont think shed appreciate that. xD
didnt she do a journal about people sending her links? >.>
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You, darling,
are amazing.
I suck at villanelles
But this is awesome
I hope she picks you ^^
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o.o
this is my first ever villanelle.
aw. im sure you dont.
thank-you!
he. xD but yes. meh too!
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Oh, I do
I'll find mine somewhere, I did post it last year sometime
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xD well yeah!
that was last year.
im sure if you tried you could do better this time.
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That's true ^^
I might try again when I have a bit of time
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youll have to send me the link!
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Shall do
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yay!
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