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Concrete Angel.

Missing image

She looks down from above

to the Mum that she loves

she see's pain again and again

and her questions are answered

written on stone

but the reasons can not be condoned.

 

Mum is sad, not glad that she had

a life like I used to know

but if help she'd had found

before I was born

then maybe now

I would not had to go.

 

I watch her at night fill her glass to the brim

filling her mind full of madness

if only she'd have talked of

her past long ago

then maybe there'd

never been no badness.

 

Historical yore came to the fore

and repetitve afflictions resumed

I'm happy in heaven

but still sad for my mum

because now her

mind and her heart are entomb'd.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    August 20

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    Very Heartfelt Sentiments, Poet!!

    I tried to view the video, but my server won't let me, as I'm 'forbidden" to click on the link you provided here, for some unknown reason. I'm using someone else's computer(?) Anyway, I really think this poem is the best tribute I've seen on this site. You are always so thoughtful, Dolores. This piece is very touching. Thank you for being you. I'm wishing you the best!!
    Peace, Love & Hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Pure Thought silver member
    August 16

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    Guess I need to go see the video, if it will run on my junk.
    yay, not a video, duh and you posted it.

    Yours is sadly beautiful... but her soul lives on through her kin who loved her.