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Name That House!!


mercy
Sweet Jesus
Oh my god!
Mary mother of god
Your name is my home?

Name
That house
My humble abode
My own sweet paradise
Your name is my home!

Heaven
Is mine
All mine indeed
To pray in humility
I have found that grace

God
Be praised
I am you
And you are king
For my abode be blessed


mercy
Sweet Jesus
Oh my god!
Praise be to god
Your really are my home!
Oh my god! Your name is my house!!!

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  • Macsword
    September 5
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    A fine prayer...

    Well presented and from a loving heart. Good work poet.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 22

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    HE is the king ..only king..and you have said it so beauutifully with the depth of your heart here..love this tone and note..well done...


  • Mango Memories gold member
    August 17

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    lol. This sounds oh so sarcastic to me.


    If thats the case, PrabhuDayal is very religious.





    I loved it never the less, this was such an attractive peice.


  • penman gold member
    August 17

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    Excellent

    Oh my such emotions you have shared and with faith. So very inspirational. Best of luck in the contest


    • Deaths Prayer
      August 17
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      hi

      Thanks for the comment i tried to take as far as i could with only limited resources..thanks penman


  • Zia-
    August 17

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    Interesting write you have here, love the way you bring across the religious side, as heaven is your home.. hmmm interesting indeed, good luck with the contest

    Zia,


  • spideracer gold member
    August 17

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    Not into all this religious stuff, so I can only judge on the merits of the poem itself. And here you've done a fabulous job. Good luck with this one in the contest.


  • rinzurajan
    August 16

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    it reads beautifully like a prayer...well done on this one...

    good luck in the contest



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