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Lightning Kisses



Lightning Kisses, my angel eyes
All those forgotten charms
Lay open, unanswered
Depressed arms
Forever!!

Love strikes twice and hard
Until that day we surrender
When I return
That soul
Endures!!

My angel in complete mourning
don’t threat or beguile
Simply, laugh, smile
Eyes returning
Loving!!

That dawn that we embrace
Will quickly descend peacefully
From above, beyond
Hopefully consumed
to be our own history

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  • spideracer gold member
    August 17

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    This is more my style, with a good message ( if one looks hard enough ) thrown in. You most definitely had some emotions embedded here. A little bland on imagery but still it's a well written poem. Take care and good luck in the contest.