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New beginnings with you.

I wonder if this thing we have was meant to be.
You and I always knew each other, I just assumed you were too good for me.

But now, here we are, tonight, holding onto each other.
Talking, confessing things we'd never say to one another.

You plant a kiss on my lips - one that wasn't expected.
It hit me like a truck, only love was the point of impact.

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Written after gettng together with Daniel. (:

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  • TwoFacedPsycho
    August 21
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    Wow! I'd heard you found someone new and were back in VA. We need to hang out sometime! Love you girl!

  • hey h.......i'm glad you found someone. i'm working on someone, but who knows...anway, thought i'd let you know i'm alive...lol ttyl miss Harley