Walk Among The Universe by HaleyMary at All poetry

Come along on a journey of the universe.
Filled with black holes and supernovas with cycles of rebirth.

In a world where what goes around comes around.
And, mysteries are found.

Existing in alpha and omega.
Underneath a sun of Ra.

It's great to walk upon the Earth.
But, it's even more beautiful to walk among the universe.

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Andre ben-YEHU
October 30

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Wise-Profound...

Interesting affirmation of pride... "Walk Among The Universe" reveals in poetic expression.

In respect,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
penman
September 30

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wonderful
A very well expressed write. So very creative. An so well written. Thank you for sharing
- HaleyMary
  September 30
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  Thanks. I honestly didn't think this was one of my best writes, mostly because it's short and I don't think it says that much. Thanks for the nice comment.
harjeet
August 18

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thank you very much!
oh thanks Mary for writing aother great poem. Your fans like me been waiting for long to hear from your side.
You fill colors in the dreams of dark universe. You are alpha and omega of universe poetry.
Thanks again
- HaleyMary
  August 18
  
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  Thank you, spirit friend. I should really try to get this up on my channel at some point. I've been spending time outside trying to enjoy the rest of the summer before college starts. Have a great day.
Desire
August 17

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Wow~
Oh My Word Sis~ You sure know how to pack a punch
in so few words
Adore Your last line also the message You convey
What a Treat it would be to walk amongst the Universe
Bravo! Yay~
More please

Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
- HaleyMary
  August 17
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  Thanks, Desire. I thought this was actually one of my more simpler writes, but glad you enjoyed it. I'll try to write more whenever I find the inspiration. Thanks for reading and commenting.
  
  Peace and love,
  
  Haley Mary
ckwriter69
August 17

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Always happy to read your poems about the universe. especially like the line about Ra. Great write, as always, thanks for sharing it.
ck
- HaleyMary
  August 17
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  Thanks, Charley. glad you liked the part of Ra. For some reason, I've always been fascinated by the culture of ancient Egypt. Thanks for reading.
  
  Peace and blessings,
  
  Haley Mary
judmc
August 17

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Another nice one
Sounds like a nice trip Haley and an interesting poem to boot I bet you would
love to walk on the moon.I draw the line at going down a black hole though
I touched on the universe a little in my "Darwins Chair" poem but I couldn't
be specific because I don't know the names of the celestial bodies like you
Anyway I enjoyed reading one of your poems again Haley..Best Wishes
and Kindest Regards....George
- HaleyMary
  August 17
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  Thanks, George. walking on the moon would be awesome, for sure. I think I had most difficulty with thinking of omega and ra for a rhyme in the poem. I'll have to check out the Darwin's Chair poem of yours. I can't recall whether I read that or not.
  
  Peace and blessings,
  
  Haley Mary
Amera
August 16

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Love it and I'd be happy to take that walk with you along the Universe.

Love,
Amera
- HaleyMary
  August 17
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  Thanks, Sis. You'd be more than welcome to join me on a walk of the universe. Any time.
  
  peace and love,
  
  Haley Mary
Pure Thought
August 16

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Awesome... I'm ready , so let's go.

I like this a lot!!!
- HaleyMary
  August 17
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  Thanks, Uncle Buddy. I actually wrote this on a whim at church this morning, so wasn't sure how it would turn out. Glad you liked it. hope you have an awesome week.