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Morality. it doesn't take a gift from heaven


 

Morality
My muse
Is always right
Grace in my being
That path towards my chosen light

Humbled beginnings earn royalties
The tempered souls
Generosity
My own belief, my cause
For curiosity

Wrong is not virtue, blindness
Open season
Time to escape
Abnormality
To reach, noble place

Evil
Unknown nemesis
Dowelled so deeper
To medal in my affairs
To take my innocence away

Goodness
Is a truth
A higher faith
That place of grace
Humbled towards that herald fortitude

Strength
Most assured
In that oath
Forever here and loyal
Endless adversities only to compare

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  • XxTwigxX
    August 17

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    Th!s !s Alr!ght..

    I am interested by how you wrote this, The first few stanzas are a total broad view over the subject matter, and them it is broken down into detail..
    "Wrong is not virtue, blindness
    Open season
    Time to escape
    Abnormality
    To reach, noble place"
    Catches me in an Awe Striking Glimpse of Harsh Reality!!!
    Awesome use of your muse here Poet..
    That's what I'm Looking For, Tha Raw Deep Emotion that thrives from
    the Inner Most Part of Your Being..

    And again, I like how you broke it down to the Good and Evil Aspects,
    For they both play a part in the Spectrum..

    Notes to Revise:
    Maybe
    "Evil..Dwelling so much Deeper"
    And you dont have to Captialize
    the first word in every stanza..
    only ones that are necessary,
    Perhaps when when starting a
    Fresh Idea..
    Uhmm, and Try to tighten up the wording and phrasing in the stanzas,
    it seems loose, and dosen't flow well.