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Intellegent Failure

Highly intelligent
walking around
this darkness that shrouds
my pale form must be bound...

Hearing the voices
they call out my name
come out and play with me
come play my game...

I call out to you
oh please hear my cry
please come and save me
God promise you'll try...

This darkness
it's feeding on my every thought
this anger that fills me
oh what have they wrought...

The trees they don't grow
and the flowers they die
they prove my distrust
so please do not lie...

Highly intelligent
walking around
this darkness that shrouds
my pale form must be bound...

Please come and play with me
don't make a sound
we'll hide in this willow
and see when we're found...

Water does not quench
the thirst of my soul
to end this night nightmare
is my true goal...

Help me to find
my way back home
but home holds no meaning
and no body knows...

I beg to be rescued
I beg to be saved
but this endless nightmare
I'll always be plagued...

Highly intelligent
walking around
this darkness that shrouds
my pale form must be bound...

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