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Everyday

Everyday I feel so happy
Everyday I feel so sad
My mind paints a picture
Of the madness I’ve got bad.

Everyday seems so clear
Through clouds of cigarettes
Drinking facetious cups of coffee
Under a full cold moon

Everyday I laugh a little more
At the tears staining my face
Watching dust bunnies on the floor
And the winner of the race

Everyday the walls close in
My mind is an open space
And planted dead centre
I scream.

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  • getjiggy28
    November 2
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    "Everyday I laugh a little more
    At the tears staining my face..."

    Love it, sometimes you have to laugh at the madness....