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Veteran

School made him biddable
War made him a killer
Capture made him a slave
Peace made him an outcast –
But love made him a man.

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  • abu nuwas
    November 2
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    Agreed

  • abu nuwas
    November 2
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    Optimistic

    But where's the rhymes?!


    • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
      November 2
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      Thanks for reading and writing.
      Optimistic: Yes I hope so.
      Rhymes: I know I proclaim I-like-rhymes but sometimes the subject IS better without and this seemed to cry out for a different treatment.
      Jim


  • Legend silver member
    August 16

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    Not to much love around today,making for fewer men Sad really
    Nice write

    • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
      August 16
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      Thanks for reading and writing. This is one dug out of an old notebook. Written a couple of years ago after reading about a U.S. Vet being arrested for begging or something similar.

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