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Finale

I cant finish this note,
I cant let it end,
I cant say the last words,
I cant have it send.

I can give it all up,
I can tell them how i feel,
I can slice my wrist,
I can make it real.

I wont reveal how i am,
I wont show them my shoulder,
I wont stop writing this note,
I wont let this get older.

I will end it all tonight,
I will let it go,
I will slice my heart open,
I will watch my blood flo.

I hope i see the pearl gates,
I hope i feel happy,
I hope in those last moments i can smile,
I hope i dont wake up when they make it all sappy.

I beg for forgivness,
I beg for them to forget,
I beg them to shed not one tear,
I beg him not to regret.

I am finished with the note,
I am never gonna fit all the words i need to say,
I am not gonna be saved,
I am done with this final day....

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  • thanks all for actually reading....thank u..

  • that made me want to cry, the best poem i have ever read on this site, xxx , if it is drawn from personal experiences please stay strong x good luck xxx :

    • this is from my experiences....i try to be strong...sometimes even the strongest...are in reality the weakest


  • Memmy-94
    August 16

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    This poem is very dark and deep.

    Show lots of emotions and heart.

    i couldn't say i have a favourite part in this poem because i loved it all

    So thank for posting !

    Peace.
    Luv and hugs.
    Hope and Faith.
    xxXxx