I cant finish this note,
I cant let it end,
I cant say the last words,
I cant have it send.
I can give it all up,
I can tell them how i feel,
I can slice my wrist,
I can make it real.
I wont reveal how i am,
I wont show them my shoulder,
I wont stop writing this note,
I wont let this get older.
I will end it all tonight,
I will let it go,
I will slice my heart open,
I will watch my blood flo.
I hope i see the pearl gates,
I hope i feel happy,
I hope in those last moments i can smile,
I hope i dont wake up when they make it all sappy.
I beg for forgivness,
I beg for them to forget,
I beg them to shed not one tear,
I beg him not to regret.
I am finished with the note,
I am never gonna fit all the words i need to say,
I am not gonna be saved,
I am done with this final day....
Author notes
goodbye?
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Comments
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thanks all for actually reading....thank u..
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that made me want to cry, the best poem i have ever read on this site, xxx , if it is drawn from personal experiences please stay strong x good luck xxx :
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this is from my experiences....i try to be strong...sometimes even the strongest...are in reality the weakest
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This poem is very dark and deep.
Show lots of emotions and heart.
i couldn't say i have a favourite part in this poem because i loved it all
So thank for posting !
Peace.
Luv and hugs.
Hope and Faith.
xxXxx




