does my silence not shout volumes
can you hear my pain as I suffer
washed in hollow words
as I fade into the world of the deceived
and drown, alone lost
no longer known
suffering in life’s mist
left empty, no heart, no soul, no faith
used beyond belief for selfish greed
your cold heart has died
and now so has mine
feeling my final grasp slip free
as I'm pulled below
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prphetic and intensely beautiful ..the image and the short poem.. Iloved it..i invite you to check mine fresh ones. thanks for sharing this one. -
excellent
I loved this one.So well expressed ina single stanza shot.Does my silence not shout volumes to you..whether it did or not I know not...but your poems from the silence of words did a plenty.Great job here.Please go
through my latest You Gonna Like it,and other poems as well.
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Nicely written Teresa. Gives a definate feeling of slowly drowning in a sea of sorrows. Thanks for sharing and keep writing
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Beautifully Sad
Teresa, this is a very sad poem ,but I too know this feeling.Very well penned ,great word choice.
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Thank You Myrtle
May your day be showered in Roses
Teresa
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