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Freedom ascended and granted

 

 

 

 

The British in Britain
One gain for all, one name by all fours
Sustained and highly prophesied
Four tribes of people
Fours hearts one desired feeling
Upheld and proudly defended
With reason and freedom ascended and granted
By the union of the united kingdom
  In the mountains, valleys and lands of the British homestead
We are not alone we are one
We contain the proud traditions of all four nations combined into one entity
Through the grace and fortitude of a herald history
One tradition
Is the DNA and the make up of are most humbled condition
One culture
Is the pure necessity of ones belief in grace
One history
A free entity grown out of animosity but found its rightful place in this world

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  • GuiltedShadow gold member
    August 16
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    Very well put. You can tell this comes from the heart.
    I see you've been quite busy.


  • spiritraven
    August 16

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    Well written

    I like the form you took. There is a lot of emotion and very good imagery in this write. You can feel the pride in every line. I think my favorite is the very last line. Welcome to AP and keep writing. I am looking forward to reading more of your writes.


    • Deaths Prayer
      August 16
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      hi

      Thankyou for your incite my friend much appreciated

      this is something that i am inspiring to write abut in further depth...but every poem we write is a stepping stone closer to where need to be

      Thankyou andrew