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The iceman

Your phrase froze my mind,
again you pushed dreams
into gelled reality.
but I still built castles
on the icebergs
you left in your wake.




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  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 30

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    Now this is something different. I can see why you got the gold in this contest. It is really an exquistely short piece. It is one of the best I have read in ages.

    Very, very good.

    Mike


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 30
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    Beautiful\! Love it! thanks so much for your entry
    gaylene


  • Puppydog gold member
    August 16
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    BEAUTIFUL!!! INSPIRING!!!!!!

    We must keep building our hopes and dreams even as they are brought down by others. 's