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High

With you softly high,
I'd plummet to the grave,
if our love came untied
Before you crystal tears I cried.
Your love is a noon river melting me.

Over me love flows like a fall
Only  breathing waters flame,
friendship's fire whispering
in my being.

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This is a poem I wrote about loving my friends very very much

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    August 16
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    awwww Stevie,
    i love this, you do have a passsion for your friends
    and me being one of them, i am blessed so much
    by it, your words penned so beautifully
    here, thank you for sharing a part of your
    heart that i treasure.

    Blessings and love always
    Rend