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Collection of Thought

Midnight adjusting
no scream could be heard
pain intense no sound
escaped.

A thought of spoken baldness
how she made tears of ...

Unwanted laughter flow
not allowing for facial concern
in the dark of midnight.

Just when she thinks
she has me trained
I regress.

She wants me to write a love poem
the best.

Hey!

Sunsets on Caddillac Mtn.
Hugs in humid weather
and pink whale poop.

Kisses in the darkness
too many whistled
after dinner drinks
stumbling under
street lights.

Yes...

        A collection of thought -




Author notes

I've seen some pretty cool stuff in my life. But pink whale poop is so far one of the highlights! Hahahaha....

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  • Poetic Drug
    August 18
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    OMG!

    I saw pink whale poop and I resolved I HAD to read this.
    I find that hilarious. This is a wonderful poem though.
    Kepp writing!

    • dillpickle62
      August 20
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      Thanks kiddo!

      I'm happy I have another witness in the world of Whale poop.


  • Rheea gold member
    August 16

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    pink whale poop.. ew ew ew and I do not ew easy .. now about that love poem she wants GET CRACKIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now lol soo nice to see you brother so nice


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 16

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    L.O.L.

    Wow, it's so great to read your WORLD again my friend..PINK POOP?? yeah..i'd put that high on my list too.. l.o.l. damn this was a great read my friend..

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