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Trying to find myself.

You shapped my life.
Not in a good way.
The worst way.

You made me bitter.
You made me hateful.
You made me miss out on the best parts of life, trying to grow up to fast.

I'm going to slow it down.
Try to find myself.
Because I don't really know who I am.

I shouldn't have to feel this way.
I shouldn't have to learn this way.

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  • i love him2012
    September 3

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    this is a good write, the prose are amazing i think it great the way it is editing is not needed on this one good job keep up the good work


  • hypnorocker
    August 16
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    Taking yourself back from others and beginning the process of owning it is always hard, but ultimately worth it...